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Exactly How I Feel

Exactly How I Feel
By: The Red Cat Jazz of Love


Sitting here,
 picking the anger from beneath my nails,
 as everyone around me smell everything
 that is shattered and frail.
 Emotions of mine has fallen down the stairs
 and I don’t even care to lick the seal
 to send off my I love you
 and I really do care about you
 and yours because I don’t.
 I am slumping pumping the disregards of
 how you annoy me and I really wish you would
 die into another life time
and just leave me locked up in my trap rage,
 pondering,
into exactly how I feel.



© Julia L. Clark Registration Number TXu-331-190, All rights reserved

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Exactly How I Feel

not feelin it!
can't write a basket cat!
I feel like a prick!

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  • Diamond
    March 31

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    AWESOME!

    "Sitting here,
    picking the anger from beneath my nail". what a catch phrase, an awesome start to a really good venting poems. Sometimes I find it difficult to write exactly how I feel or maybe I just don't know how to phrase it but, you did a great job and in such a poetic way. Avril


    • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
      March 31
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      >>>>> the worst<<<<< i ever wrote! oh silent ink. i have a three line rule well me and my dad mentor if you can't say nothing in 3 lines to make me sit up then we already past judgement that your words further on going to be a waste of the time of my eyes uh huh yep thanks

  • Yvette Champ gold member
    March 24

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    Hon, you press a petulant pout to the page and stage the empty arena of a blank canvas as the mind craves release and words become an elusive battleground with the minx that is the muse. She doesn't ever work her best when ordered to work to rule but when inspired, fired, fueled. I feel your frustration.


    Love


    Yvette


  • Ephiphany
    March 23

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    awww Lovee'

    Piffy's here...Piffy's here to make it all better Even though u were angry I still feel the passion in this piece.

    Love you


  • kennethlaney
    March 22

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    Pretty Good

    I think this is pretty good for you to be writing thru a "Julias' Writers Block", Love you Baby. "BOO"

  • Dobar Dan
    March 22

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    Hi Julia

    First impression is that youz a little bit pe-od - not at me I hope - this a "from the heart write" for sure - lookimg good you is - poetry is a great place to vent - love that smile - hugs - Joe --------------------------------------------------------------------------- peace


  • hotchocolate gold member
    March 22
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    forgot clappies

  • hotchocolate gold member
    March 22

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    Hey hon you know I got to be the first to comment LOL! You sound a little angry here glad you got to vent out some of it. I'm here if you need to talk cause I got love for ya

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