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Rendevous

A massacre
The country frightful-
A sand storm .

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My Very First Haiku !

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  • Meroza
    March 31

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    I was about to say "naawm how cute with your first Haiku" but then it struck me what the haiku just said...wow. Thats a lot of anger in those few words for sure.

    Good luck