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Undying love

True love is a beautiful feeling,
Transcending our lifetimes, worlds, even dreams,
Undying if mutually reeling,
The power of love extends nature’s seams,
A person whole, and remembered that way...

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The most intense feeling, and also the longest lasting...

A contest entry

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  • The Fun House silver member
    April 17
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    Absolutely a lovely piece, it makes one sigh. Beautifully penned.


    • fluffatron69
      April 18
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      Thank you very much!
      I liked the idea of the contest btw; simple but difficult to do well!