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Recollections


Midnight muse
swirl of smoke
zombies trample over
coffins long sealed

a familiar tune
from long past
plays havoc
with my heart

the last sunset
seems like ages ago
caffeine keeps me warm
this shivering night

the frost on the glass
the familiar sound of rain
the soul feels heavy
the pen seems light

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  • individuality gold member
    March 22

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    ah i know that zombie footwear stamp, coughing fits and sighs of i want to sleep. not sure why you capitalise the first word when all other words are in lowercase, that was distracting to me personally, but the poem flows free.


  • DesolatELifE
    March 22
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    That's a very nice way to end it.

  • me gusta.


  • liltulip gold member
    March 22

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    this is lovely

    i like the imagery in your words here, absolutely lovely to read, you have done a great job, thanks for sharing!

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