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Tim.

Lock eyes,
                   No breath,
                                    No heartbeat,
                                                           Just staring.



A smile,
                  A wink,
                                   A few words,
                                                          My heart strings.



A question,
                  An answer,
                                     A first date,
                                                         Left speechless.



A touch,
                 An embrace,
                                        A kiss,
                                                       I'm yours.


                                     A whisper,
                                     'I love you,'
                                     But we were too young.

I hold you,
                I'm crying,
                                  Your heart,
                                                     makes no sound.



A rumour,
                 Another,
                                    The lie,
                                                     Is unwound.



We argue,
                  We cry,
                                We're silent,
                                                      Inside.



One last kiss,
               One embrace,
                                      I say it,
                                                  Goodbye.

 

 

 

 



Even though I let you go,
I wish I had stayed longer.
And even though we say we've moved on,
I can tell that you still love me too.
You have someone,
So do I.
I love him very much,
But I still miss you all the time.

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  • oh my wow...interesting form...i've never seen poems written like this but i love this...GL


  • Emmyb gold member
    March 22
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    absolutely fantastic write!!!