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Silly genie

I search for a treasure,
I found a box,
Inside of it is a shiny little lamp,
I rub it in my hand,
And BOOM!!
A silly genie comes out,
Asking me for a 3 wishes,

My first wish,
I wish for a car,
But he gave me a cart,

My second wish,
I wish for money,
But he gave me a monkey,

Last but not the least,
My third wish,
So a have an agreement,
If my third wish will not come true,
I will have another 3 wishes,
So I wish for a fame life,
But he gave me a frame,

Expected that I will have a 3 wishes again,
So here come the 3 wishes,
But sad to say,
He gave me three dishes,
How silly is this genie,
Making my life miserable….


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  • She-Cries
    September 24
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    very nice


  • Samantha Marie
    July 3
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    lol how silly!! thanks for entering and good luck!


  • Kari gold member
    June 21

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    I'm sorry but you must be 10 years of age or younger. If you can provide your date of birth and show you're under 10 u can reenter.

  • sunsunny3235
    June 21
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    Nice!


  • Emo Boytoy
    June 8
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    I really like this!


  • Lanasaur
    May 27
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    Hahahaha..i love it!


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    May 10

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    thank you for this entry into my contest for jordyn lyn. i wish you the very best of luck. you wrote this well. viyanna rosemarie


  • HereComesTheSun
    April 26
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    light hearted and a great read
    thanks for entering


  • Treasure 5 gold member
    April 26

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    This was a pretty good write you have here, Thank you for entering Good luck in the contest. It was a pleasure to read.


  • trekkergirl
    April 5
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    this one made me grin because it was a funny silly little thing. Only complaint is that the red font made it just a tad bit hard to read with the blue coloring of the background. Not horrible or anything just a tad bit for my eyesight which here lately is giving me so trouble. Oh well, thanks for sharing this cute write with us and good luck in the contest


  • JinSays gold member
    April 5

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    Those genie's will do it every time.
    Thanks for taking the time to enter, and I wish you all the best.
    Love,
    jin

  • karaharapriya silver member
    April 3
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    Nice play on words. It is a silly genie indeed.


  • redbarchettadrive gold member
    March 22

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    At the end you could had also pointed out that it was a dyslexic deaf genie! Pretty good poem emoempress!

  • bleeeeee
    March 22
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    cool

    funny

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