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Unware Of The Undying

I believe
I am unaware
of the pain that I had cost

and unaware of his love
his love is undying
for I am here

unaware of my thoughts
and how my heart is undying
faith is always near

within me
I am unaware of life
and of his undying love.

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  • The Fun House silver member
    April 17

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    The poem is beautifully done. Unfortunately the contest is for 10 lines or less and it doesn't quite fit. I'm sorry.