luna brillante-
un beso cristalino
pa oscuridad
Author notes
haiku en espanol 
pa is the contracted form of para.
translation:
bright moon-
a crystalline kiss
for darkness
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el poema es muy bien hecho en las dos lenguas, pero lo priefiero en español. ¡excelente!
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this is awesome!
i never would have thought to write a spanish haiku.
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i love spanish. and i love this haiku too.
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Aww this is so nice. Great image - I love it. My suggestion would be to cut out "un" - articles are usually frowned upon in haiku. And it would just sound better, or so I believe. I've never heard "pa" before - is it formal enough? Anyway. A haiku usually doesn't have a title but I like the title otherwise. This is good stuff. Thanks for your entry
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