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Spin.

I remember the feel of pink silk, wrapping around my legs
The tutu falling gracefully around my thighs
The smell of hairspray throwing my mind in circles.

But mostly I remember flying
My feet barely touching the floor
spinning through the air
I remember flying.

At home that night I remember screaming
"Justin spin me again!"
An indulgent brother spinning me until I stumbled around
Laughing and smiling as my face flushed.

I wish I could go back to when I could spin and fly
But mostly I wish I could go back to when my brother was here
To laugh with me.
To spin me and make me fly.

Faster Justie faster.


Spin...

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  • Jersene gold member
    March 26

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    this is a sweet memory. I love the thought of flying and how as children simple things like spinning can make us believe we really are. Enjoyed. Thank you so much for entering