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Weakness

Masked the thought of love
With the grin of hate
Realizing that the mask is only half

Half love is shaded in darkness
Hate shows itself willingly
Faces only I have witnessed

If your face was to be shown
Would it be shrouded in darkness
Or would it only grin upon me?

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  • love is blind to the eye;; and hate shows itself so freely because everyone can express hate better than they can love;; neways great write;; and right now i'm lost for the words i want to say so i'll leave it at great write.