Crooked mirrors obcsure the view
of the mess I've made;
broken marionettes and bloodied walls
I'm not alone but at peace with my new friends.
They lie more still than ever before
and no longer get tangled in their strings.
I'm happier among this murderous bliss
even though it's cost me everything.
Author notes
Pic Credit-venomous_desire@deviantart
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A contest entry
- Dark Pic Prompt/PIF by Carolina Moon.
700 points, ended March 22, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - BRING IN THE DARKNESS by lovingpoet.
745 points, ended April 5, 34 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
soo....whats your honest opinion?
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now that I got some points thaought you would love some and good luck
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Thank you!
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cool write I like it thank you for sharing it in the contest
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Dark and very well fitting to the prompt. Thanks for entering
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I really connect with this poem. thankyou for summing it up for me. well written
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Wow, love this one, very dark. I can picture this one even without the prompt, well written Katie. I like the marionette sort of image.
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VERY dark... best of luck.
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Dark and lovely.
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Thank you
heheh vampires --->
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