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Metaphor

"To me, zombies are a metaphor. Being 'undead' and not really thinking? Conforming. Eating brains? Passing on the brainwashed curse. Will this madness ever end?" said I to the one prying open my skull and feasting on a filling feast.

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  • HOODWINK!

    Yikes! A darkly deep and going to the other side poem that reminds me to try to write something dramatic soon.


  • Dark Otter
    May 13
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    Watch out for the zombies!

    Was this one using proper etiquette and using a spoon?

  • welcome to all poetry

    I love zombies, and I think that's exactly what it is. Romero's are all political statements. Good write here, love the last line. I do feel like maybe you could break this down into stanzas so the reader can catch your flow


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