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Take Me Again

One last inhalation
and the river swallows me,
me,
newly alive, ready to cry and learn
to lose all over again.

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Written: 8/22/08 11:12 PM

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    May 20

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    Hood-Wink!

    I think the second 'me' isn't necessary in this but that is just my opinion; another brillant poem that invokes deep thoughts and imagation

    ♥
    Stay safe
    ~Manda