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numb.

numb the stars

they are shining too bright. i can't see
his smile, hiding behind
them -- can't find him

cradle the ink

pouring into the cracks of my
fingers.
he's flying away into
sleep

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Written: Feb. 19, 2009

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    April 19

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    "cradle the ink" - What a line!

    Such a powerful, beautiful poem from your ink
    I am awed by this

    Keep Writing!
    ♥
    Enjoy AllPoetry
    Stay safe
    ~Manda
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