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danseuse

your dips and sways
like foreign words
form pretty pictures
i wish i understood

i sense your freedom
see your sweat
wonder how you make it look so effortless

perhaps, at five,
i could have joined
your slipper-footed ranks,
but now my toes are out of reach

my sense of rhythm
extends no further
than fingertips on ivory

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