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i love; loving you

I love, loving you; for every breath I take and with every step I take.
It’s you; your love is why I am awake.

I live, to love you, your touch; in absence, the picture of you in mind I behold.
Longing for you; I am, to hold.

We are the perfection; in definition, the greatest love story ever told.

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  • jamesbliss
    March 22
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    Short and sweet. I really like the format; never seen it before. Well done!


  • Heva Feva
    March 21
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    omfg

    that is so beautiful!! aww it made me cry [= in a good way though. ur an amazing writer!!