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the chocolate chapter

what they saw was mouth watering 

chocolate toffee fudge jam rolly poly house's 

candy floss trees but at other side of a soda sea

there was a door. they Wonder to them selves

how they where going to get across. then they turned

around and saw a banana boat! so together they pulled the boat

to the edge of the flowing river and sailed across.

 

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its a paragraph of a story i what i wrote at school

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  • Lanasaur
    April 16
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    Awww. how lovely! good luck.
    Lana
    x


  • lovelovelove
    March 22
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    it sounds very tasty


  • maralisa silver member
    March 21

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    a wonderful write alisa I love your sweet imagery throughout good luck in the contestmum