Cut out this little beating heart.
Throw it away, but first tear it apart.
Cause I have no use for it
and I don't want to give a shit.
I can't have this pain machine beating,
when inside I can't control all this weeping.
This life has no hope.
There is no way to cope.
Without someone to hold you,
when it all comes crashing down.
So take out this heart.
Tear it apart.
I don't want to feel
what cannot be real (for me).
Take care of this pain
before I go insane.
Make me feel numb
cause I can't be with someone.
Stop telling me lies.
I see fakness in your eyes.
Beat it, defeated, take it all away.
In this skin, in this world, I cannot stay.
Echos of who I want to be
are dying inside, crippling me.
And I'm screaming, screaming for you to see
to take away pain, to just destroy me.
So take out this heart.
Tear it apart.
I don't want to feel
what cannot be real (for me).
take care of this pain
before I go insane.
make me feel numb
cause I can't be with someone.
And I can't go on
knowing I'm wrong.
Confusion and anger, now fuel my songs
Sick of what I see.
Sick of being me.
Sick of a world that doesn't want me,
Take me out of this game,
extinguish this flame,
cause living this life, is a waste, just a shame
So take out this heart.
Tear it apart.
I don't want to feel,
what cannot be real (for me).
Take care of this pain
before I go insane.
Make me feel numb,
cause I can't be with someone.
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"I see fakness in your eyes." fakeness should be falseness it reads better.
Other then this I like what I have read and I am sorry that you are hurti8ng like this. If you need to talk to someone I am around most all the time even though I am cloaked Thank you for sharing. -
This is nice
the structure is like a song, with verses and choruses. I like the rhyming, and your words made me feel so desperate and nearly crying
"Echos of who I want to be
are dying inside, crippling me.
And I'm screaming, screaming for you to see
to take away pain, to just destroy me."
Love that part
Keep writing thanks for sharing
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I tried to put a tune to this.. and everything heard couldn't be matched with this piece. I feel the rhyme was very forced and the flow obstructed several times. Songs need a rythm.
In the words itself, very sad. I can sense the pleading desperation knawing at the reader.
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