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How many options do I have until I die for you?
How many choices must I make before I cry for you?
My heart is pulling me down as I try to read your mind;
It's telling me not to, not to waste my time.

Pulling my hair, but leaving it down.
I bat my eyes when your around.
I pray one day you'll see me as someone who cares for you.
Whatever must I do to not have this care for you?

I try to see things through your eyes of stone,
I see nothing and once more I groan!
I look into your eyes as you look into mine;
What are you thinking?- it's a waste of time!

For him, I could see me.
His eyes in agony over what I felt.
It broke my heart.
Please, Oh please won't you break my heart.

How many options do I have until  I die for you?
How many choices must I make before I cry for you?
My head is wreeling around as I cry  for you.

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  • Ouch,

    a powerful strain of thoughts, thank you for entering! I hope you find someone that will not only acknowledge you but will let you read into them just enough now and then, it's more comfortable that way^_^
    H. R. Jacobson

  • yea, i know.... ....nice work, great emotion..