I am a complete and utter failure
or so I seem to think I am.
I cannot undestand exactly what it is
that you want
need from me.
Could it be that I am truly
as useless to you as I feel.
I wonder, if I were truly gone
would you miss me?
Author notes
10 lines or less
In a list
A contest entry
- Pick a word - Write a poem in 10 LINES or Less (U) by The Fun House.
1050 points, ended April 17, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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The feeling is good and quite common to us all at some point in life. I admire the emotion but the creativity is a bit lacking in this piece. I would have liked to see a bit more originality.
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had i could this to my boss......but i quit first..i bet he misses me to ...lol..good write.
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oh tell me about that one... I am soooooo close to quitting at my work place. I am so tired of their BS
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This is touching and I feel your pain. I have had similar experiences, but it turns out fine in the end. Then you'll be okay be able to put it all down to experience.
Good luck in contest! -
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sometimes we all go through this useless stage... mine I think lasted forever. hehehe No one likes to feel useless.
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