I was unaware,
That you would even care,
Or if I should dare.
You were unaware,
That I even liked you,
Or if you should even try.
But you cared,
I dared,
I liked you,
And you really tried.
A contest entry
- Pick a word - Write a poem in 10 LINES or Less (U) by The Fun House.
1050 points, ended April 17, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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This has a cute flow to it and I like that. I can see the scene played out before me reading it.
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Nice!
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Cute
Contest poems are sometimes difficult to write - you did well here -I like the rhyme - Keep up the good work young lady - Bless God - Joe (poet extrodinare) - lol
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A lively piece, quite playful.
Enjoyed your write.
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ItS sHoRt BuT i LuV iT!!i KAnT nEvEr WrItE shOrT pOeMs!!IdK y..HaHa!!GrEaT wRiTe!!
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Short and sweet- very succint and tight rhyme pattern.
Nice work- good luck in contest!
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