She looks into her lover's eyes,
Both promising, without words, of forever
Their gentle lips touch,
holding out hands to one another
Each touching the other
in gentle caresses
Enriched in endless passion
which will never let them go
Finding it impossible to look away from her eyes...
Gaze staying forever locked in their souls
A contest entry
- Feminine togetherness by Cerulean Sunrise.
700 points, ended March 26, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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so soft and romantic.. i love this poem so much


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thank you!
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Beautiful indeed. Very passionate piece.


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This is really passionate and really shows some deep feeling..
jennifer is a supertastic writer person. -
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ashley is a supertastic writer person too!!!
thanks!
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tis is different ,but great ness all the same


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Thanks Becca!
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Soft and wonderful. Thanks!
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Thank you!
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Aw, cute one.



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Thanks Ashley-wa!!!
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great take on the prompt....the last line sums it up perfectly...
becca


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a nice take on the promt good luck in the contest
maralisa


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thanks!
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