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Unicorn

Unicorns prance,
In beautiful array.

Protecting the few Virgins we have left.

Ready to fight,
at a moments notice,

These glorious creatures can fight with glory.

But when given the change,
let them lay their head in your lap.

They'll love you forever.

A contest entry

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  • The Fun House silver member
    April 17

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    I have to tell you outright that the background on this poem is horrid with the text. Very hard to read. The poem itself was interesting though and I like it. nice job.


  • Mr Id
    March 21

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    This is quite an unusal choice of subject matter.

    It is well written- you talk as though you actually have had an experience with a unicorn!

    Good luck in contest!