Towel-Wrapped, kitten eyed
Two rosebuds, tongue tied
Lilly white fingers,
Touch
A hushed plum-stained lip
In truth, they whisper fruitdrops
Cream-mouthed, vanilla dipped.
Kissing dimples, giggle-fits
Patter of rain, silent, sunlit
Agile tastebud sliding,
a fragile open form
pulse-perfect in rhythem
amidst the rain storm.
In a list
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What did you think
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Very nice, sensula write. I liked this. Your word play and choice of words really brought this to light. I like the imagery of this peice and the rhyme and flow were really good. Great job on this poet. Thanks and good luck int the contest.
Josh
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a good poem, i like the kissing dimples imagery, everyone always seem to swoon over dimples with cute aww's and ah's. again, a light feel here that wraps the eyes in smiles.
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I love the art in this fine poem.
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Lovely, I loved the word choices here!
Best wishes,
Khia
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Sweet
It has a sweet wording. Nicely written. Keep it up.
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Absolutely wonderful, beautiful images.
Good luck in the contest.
Alex.
p;s. Is there an "e" in rhythm?
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Me likey.
Nice list name. I might peek at that. -
lovely...sensual...great meter! all and all....a joy to read. Love, Lane
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so pure....and tender. great take on the prompt!
becca
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aw a nice take on the promt good luck in the contest
maralisa
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This had a delightful rhythm to it Emma, very pleasant.
All the best dear,
With much love,
mj.
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