To live, to find that one special person.
To die, to live your life with them forever.
To find the one you love is everything
Live with them forever and find that special song we sing.
Togetherness in life is all we need.
But only a few of us can exceed.
Find the one that is worth living for.
Live your life and explore.
Have your heart sing that special song it sings.
Find the one to complete the perfect ring.
Author notes
This yes, might be a little confusing. I'm very sorry if it is, but it makes perfect sense to me. To live life is to be able to find the one you are made for. To make two imperfect people one perfect person. There is no living with out love. and there is no love with out living...
A contest entry
- You live to die... by Never Known.
400 points, ended March 21, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Be brutal I can take it....I think
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I honestly dont know why you said it'd be confusing, but in heart...it's not. Anyone who's ever been touched by the fact of love can rest assure to understand this poetic write. It's rather simple, but in simplicity lies true emotion and depth! I guess my only small dislike is of all the fullstops. Makes it feel so...to the point. Or is it just me? But anyways, glad you showed me this poem to read! Do give me more! Thanks!
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It is not confusing...sends our messages just fine, love has that special effect tomake one feel that life is complete...thoughts flow well throughout the poem..
All the best in the contest!
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it's alright
now much confusing
it's a nice piece
but i feel some hard work is needed
thanks for sharing
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the poet of hearts and beautiful words
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very good
It is very true poem and so nice. Really, what is life for than to find your other half?
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i love it. i believe the same thing.
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Great job... and goodluck
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