Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Feminine

Slow purr succulent to the compassion,
felt for her fellow man by choice.
Only these negative vibes of fashion
are yin to his yang of serenity.
That beauty lies within the meekness
of a feminine cultivating
a kinder spirit therein

Author notes

Quote:

'She who does not make the world better for having lived in it has failed to be all that a woman should be' - Mabel Hale
This quote reminded me of your prompt. Enjoy
Prompt: between here and serenity


30-40 words

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 6 of 6

  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    April 3

    Edit | Reply
    Wow this was beautiful. I love the softness you portrayed here. Well done. Best to you in the contest


  • Tqop
    March 24
    Edit | Reply
    Elegant and beautiful.

  • kendhal22
    March 22
    Edit | Reply
    Thank you


  • lovelovelove
    March 22
    Edit | Reply
    this is lovely.


  • Antipodi
    March 22
    Edit | Reply
    Beautiful use of verse to describe the feminine soul poet

    • kendhal22
      March 22
      Edit | Reply

      Thank you

      Thank you for the wonderful comment given to my poem. Kendhal22

1 - 6 of 6