Eyes catch each other
Reality pulled away
Captivated by something unknown...
Deep brown, full of secrets
Holding mine in trust
Beauty, warmth, and comfort
A mirror of your soul
May the love light shine forever
In your lovely glowing eyes
May you forever love-
And keep the spark alive
Author notes
4) Faith - I believe light shines forever in the eyes of those who love.
5) Love - Beautiful soul, precious and adorable, how I love thee with all my heart.
favourite colour is purple... well its more of an obsession than a favourite though...
I combined the two options and stole words from both
A bit random but thats how I roll. I also have an obsession with brown eyes...
Hope you like it Mike.
ps. I wouldn't mind joining your AP family... but I don't really know what you need 
♥Kat
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A contest entry
- A Contest of the Depths of the Soul by A-muse-in-writer.
3250 points, ended March 27, 21 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please judge as critically as you want
Comments
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Aww this is gorgeous! It reminded me of a speech that should be said at a wedding or something! That love should never leave anyone. Beautiful as always!
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Beautiful entry
I love the way you combined the two into something light and immensely breathtaking as the moments eyes dance with each other in love. Very well written. I am not adding finalists until after competition closes.
Oh I would love for ya to join my family. Just look on my page and see what you might like to be or come up with something new, I don't mind.
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Thanks so much!
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