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She wished her heart could love

In a sunny garden this woman sits
With ‘pause for thought’ written all over her face
Hoping and dreaming for her life
With a prayer to her heart
A prayer about being brave
To let people in
To forget anything else
                              than the ability to love


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For a contest about love. This is my piece for that.

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  • Amandainlove
    March 21

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    Were you meaning to say prayer instead of pray?
    Because that is the only thing that makes sense.
    I would add this to the final list if you did that because it would be a wonderful piece.
    Good luck.