a lone sentinel -
proud but broken
awaiting a new day
a new life
just a touch of warmth
is all that’s needed
promises yet to be fulfilled
but
time is constant
Author notes
Prompt ... the picture
Credit to PerfectImperfection
31 words used
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A thought provoking take to the image prompt. Nicely done. Thank you for your entry!
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Good write! What an appropriate thing for a lone tree!
Lovely!
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Ah, my afternoon's meditation... thank you! Lita
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Feels like you pulled that metaphor out of the clouds.
Lovely, Sue.
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A beautiful write Sis, sometimes it pays to look towards nature, this is one of those times.
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Nice job on this. Trees like tho one used in your prompt are beautiful sentinals on the landscape.
Great job.
Mike
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Lots of promises waiting by the sides of the roads, but many round here are exploding in pink or white
Good write here
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