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A Fine Line

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

a fine line
many crossing points
or
just the one



how do we know
until we cross it



when we have -



do we really care?
 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Word prompt : INSANITY or Sanity

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  • Kari gold member
    March 22
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    hmm maybe stop and think....
    thanks for your entry it was good

  • Purrsanthema
    March 22

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    This is so beautiful and true. It makes me think about 20-20 hindsight. How do we know when we have crossed the line? And sanity is relative, it depends on our environment, to an extent.


  • csmmoms2
    March 22

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    Ya, we care! But we never know that the line has been crossed 'till we look back. It was a fork in the road... hmm...if I could only go back. -c


  • hawkeslake gold member
    March 21

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    I love the "fine line"! SOOOO many times, crossed without awareness... beautifully said, my friend. Lita


  • cricketjeff gold member
    March 21
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    A fine write


    Good thoughts

    Jeff

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