Come play with me, I'm your favorite toy.
Kick me like a hacky sack; until I fall to the floor.
Planting bruises with each caressing kiss,
Marked by the fist that reiterates your desire.
Energize me with your battery acid words of kindness,
Use me like a warm blow up doll
Ignore the sounds of sobs from the pillow beside you,
Just lay there self satisfied, while I wonder is this love?
Coddle me like a fragile baby doll,
Soothe your ego, it's not your fault.
A puppet should always obey it's master;
But I'm the dirty rag doll that drives you to the depths of hell.
Zombified over time, unresponsive to your “love.”
Waiting until you find new ways to make me squeal.
Will you ever grow tired of me,
Or will I remain, forever, your favorite play toy?
A contest entry
- Prewrite Heaven by Heavenly Angel.
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your poem was very strong and sad. the imagery was also good. i like how you compared yourself to all these different toys. it is so sad that you are used as someones play toy. abuse is such a sad thing. thank you for entering my contest.
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Very strong and powerful wording here with a powerful message behind the words...wow
I, at one time, could relate to this piece so my heart goes out to you if this is a true-to-life piece; no one should be another's "plaything" and be used and abused in such demeaning manner
A fine sharing this is; thank you for being part of the contest!
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