leaving the city that morning,
a broken hymen
of cloud, sheet-rains stinging
our backs as we walk.
A contest entry
- The Feast of the Annunciation by ourgirlFriday.
700 points, ended March 24, 5 entries
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i like this write. very well done.
xx. red.
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The imagry here is very tangiable, this is very emotive. Good luck in the contest
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An original take on this prompt, very vivid imagery.
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