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Maya

Vividly you escape me
As I hold on to the triumph of revisiting the ruins of what
I believed to be.
Sadness engulfs the sorrowful sight of shattered dreams
of unfulfilled hopes.

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  • Ms-Mouse
    March 21
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    Short but expletive, and great read.