Shackles,
Indiscriminate,
Force delay of instinct,
Of mind, and of soul.
Abyssal and maddening,
The fragmentation of
The lights, the voices,
Unforgettably tactile.
Reality broken upon
lucidity's failure.
The primitive censure
Of a heart.
Insanity.
Author notes
Prompt - Insanity
A contest entry
- Quickie 5 - 50 Words - Insanity or Sanity ... by Kari.
400 points, ended March 22, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comment away! :D
Comments
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Very well done. Thanks for your entry!
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Oh my! O.o Thank you very much! I hope you had fun doing the contest. :3
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Very nice
Okay!
I really liked: "Unforgettably tactile." I'm not sure if the final line, "Insanity." is necessary; although it does act like a period to end the poem. Also, its inclusion allows the poem to stand on its own without having to read the AN for what the prompt was. Very nice entry, I think you'll win a cup with this one.
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Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed my poem ^_^
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