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A time for us

Can't hide behind the works any longer
Can't stand with the holy pain anymore
Just a little brave to stop all this
Just a little selfish to regain the true happiness

For the world they may seen
as a cheater,
not knowing the trembling
of all this sudden changes
toward this true happiness

Little regret that we did not meet years earlier
but people say better late than never
just fill our cup with the true happiness
no more grief
no more silent in pain

Embrace the happiness
within this time
a time for us
at last

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go brave to embrace the true happiness

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  • brianmc
    March 24

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    love the centiment, nicely written, not my favourite form i prefer a bit more rhythm but i did enjoy it ty for sharing it


  • arafura gold member
    March 21

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    I love the poem and the message contained within. I think we must all be brave enough to seek happiness. Well done!

  • mmm... true happiness.. i miss it.
    anyhoo, like the poem, i think its neat =]