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Leave Judgemental Values

Leave judgemental values far behind
Inner feelings changes ring to free
The links which let "[s]he thinks" melt into "We",
Trust soul which whole would be in heart AND mind.
Light touch, much worthy magic may unwind,
Expanding outwards opportunity,
Mocking blind conformity to see
Inside to widen scope but not to blind.
Dreams evolve, anticipate, remind
Need independent mind to enth degree
Ideas, ideals refute rule by decree,
Guard from lip-service, context pre-designed.
Hold convictions high, spurn compromise,
To learn to learn, not follow others’ lies.

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  • Wow this is really great. I loved the story you told, it was just great from start to end.
    Great job, and welcome to the finalists list.
    ~Serenity

  • Superb Plus +

    You certainly have managed to sum up a lot of my own personal philosopy, and spiritual beliefs in this write. I can truely relate to it. As several ministers, of various denominations, have said, in services I've attended: "God is Un-conditional, and Non-judgemental love." Again, a most excellent write.