You breathe and I hear you
My body a slave to your sensuality
Every sound you make
My body reacts
You say yes and I want more
You touch and I imagine
How it feels
I wish it were me
My hand becomes yours
Every stroke is your doing
When I squeeze
It is you I feel
Your words with your voice
Drive me to ecstasy
Although self-inflicted
Necessary
Physical can’t be
Emotional so strong
Mental like a mastered skill
We make love
You speak
I do
I speak
You do
Together and apart
Minds connected
Emotions real
Pleasure self-administered
Passion uncontrolled
Ecstasy beyond the physical
Sensuality, the imaged mind
Sex self-satisfied
Eyes closed, mind unbridled
We make love
Like no others do
More real than flesh
You and me
Love and fear
Heart and soul
Two… One
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2 lovers entangled in the need to please. This certainly goes beyond the physical. I last lines remind of holding my breath and going underwater. Just my thoughts. Thank
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Interesting
I would love to know what your aim was here, what the underlying thought is as personally it made me feel and imagine maybe a phone encounter,
As i got the distinct impression that these two lovers were not together.
Well wrote
Love it
thanks for sharing
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Wow. You did an amazing job on this. I'm left breathless at what an awesome poem this is. The detail and submission/dominant traits came out in this poem.
Great job!!
Sammy
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breathless
this is an amazing write Sir, im glad i stumbled upon it today
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I am still awed by this. The emotions come through so clearly. I love it.
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Baby.....
You have no idea what you do to me... I love you!
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i loved this, it read so smooth and the way you put everything, how you chose to describe it. it was perfect. and also. i loved how i could feel what the character was saying without them necessarily saying everything. great poem.
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