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social studies class.

I walked into room 411 and I saw you smile at some girl with blonde hair and really intense blue eyes who was sitting next to you and I took a seat on the other side of the room and the guest speaker started to introduce himself and then all I heard was blah blah blah and I don't remember what he said because I was too busy making myself take slow, deep breaths and trying to relax and calm down and be fake and be happy and asking to go to the bathroom and feeling alone and scared and angry and the

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relief of a razor blade and listening to my heart go beatbeat beatbeat beatbeat beatbeat, it wouldn't slow down I wouldn't slow down nothing ever slows down and putting on bandaids and coming back to class and sitting and staring at the clock
and waiting and waiting and

finally the bell rang and you left.

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  • rollingzen
    September 24
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    very intense description...pulled me right in.....


  • BlindingLove
    September 23

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    you're a great writer and that was a real good poem! I can relate and i enjoyed reading it!!!


  • JeremyWilliams
    June 3
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    Thank you and good luck


  • written-in-ink
    April 11

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    You could have at least said hello.
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    dude i fucking know right!!!!
    hahah
    thank you so much for entering
    this was a wonderful piece


  • xxSerendipityxx
    March 21

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    I relate to this poem alot, My favorite part is
    "The ball rang after what seemed like a billion years, and you jumped out of your seat. My heart fell to the floor as you were the first one out the door to go catch your bus.
    You could have at least said hello."
    Great write and best of luck in the contest!


  • etoile
    March 20
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    aw.. seems like a bit of a jerk tho..
    i hope things work out for you.

    but apart from that, this is really really well written. i love the random facts you put in like the amount of floor tiles. that really hit me. i love it.
    and the last line almost brought tears to my eyes.
    i can really relate to this.. maybe a different class though.
    goodluck in the contest<33


    • jayyniecakes.
      March 21
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      which class?


      • etoile
        March 21

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        last year, my computer class.
        and the beginning of this year english class haha.
        not anymore no more school boys for me aha.

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