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Lies, All Lies

Lies, all lies.

 

The love you led me to believe in,
The love I thought was true;
The love reflected in our eyes,
The love I had for you.

The bright red rose still damp with moisture,
The feeling of your lips on mine;
The brightness of your welcoming smile,
The awareness of our hands entwined.

 

The love letters in my drawer,

The memories of being together;

The chocolates you gave me so long ago,

The vow to be side by side forever.

 

Lies, all lies.

 

Now I sit on the cliff, wailing,

Tears tumbling down my face

And as you turn your back away,

I am already from your heart erased.

 

They were lies, all lies...

Author notes

this wasn't based on an actual experience, but more from imagining an experience many others have had: you fall in love, only to find your dear one doesn't love you back.

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  • Allspice
    June 8

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    Great

    This is sweet and bitter all at the same time. My fav stanza:
    The bright red rose still damp with moisture,
    The feeling of your lips on mine;
    The brightness of your welcoming smile,
    The awareness of our hands entwined.

    Bravo!!!

  • this is a sad love write from you. i wish you well in these contests that you have entered. looking forward to reading more from you in the near future. viyanna rosemarie


  • Reanna Eryn
    April 6

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    So emotional...So beautiful...It wasn't what I was looking for...but nonetheless...absolutely outstanding.


  • BettieSue
    March 22
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    Simply beautiful
    I love it <3

    Great write


  • Angelix
    March 20
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    Beautiful.

  • ahh its very good. It has a very nice rythym alomst its difficult to describe. I like It a lot its very beautiful.


  • Amandainlove
    March 20
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    Hmmm. I like it.
    Good luck.

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