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If I were not here



Would they miss me if I left?
If one day I ceased to be.
Would they miss this empty shell,
That harbors all of me.

If one day I did not wake,
Would they fail to see…
All the pain I felt inside,
This sickness inside of me

Would they know the pain inside
The feelings I have felt
Would they know what they have caused
Would they see all the welts


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  • Firequeen
    March 30
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    powerful writing here
    it's as if you bled on the screen it's self
    Keep the ink flowing
    amazing
    fire