The silence between our words
speak in twilights paradise
they beckon us toward
understanding in a realm
of self consciousness
as drunken spirits dance
in the harmony of tranquility
where spoken thoughts
scramble in disarray
trying to find closure
in the aftermath of things unsaid
lingering in a world of make believe
A contest entry
- You like Songs? by Darkwell.
1700 points, ended April 10, 25 entries
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lovely wordings with wispy and flowing message. i hear this with lots of ethereal music lingering and weaving into the lines sustained and unrushed, like soft waves of rhythm but with powerful deep drum beats here and there too to reinforce the chaos of the story. just awesome
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This write leaves me in mystery where unspoken
thoughts are left to linger...liked this write. Best
of luck
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Awesome write here
Wow you penned some really deep thoughts into this one very well done
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wow
it really is nice seeing different sides of you, and yet your writes are still dead on, and great reads!
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I have come to learn that the words that hurt the most and cut the deepest are the ones that are never said... amazing how you can simplify it so... I love your peotry... it's inspiring and your way with words is astonishing!!!! I love it!!!
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Your words are deep and powerful my friend!!!! This is very very well written!!!! I love the way that You portrayed this piece you did an incredible job!!!! I love it!!!! I LOVE U!!!!!
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i liked this poem a lot
i love how this poem kind of says that many things are said, even when nothing is actually spoken at all. great job!
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