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my eyes are glued
on a lighted box
though i see not
its brilliance
but the vision
it holds beyond

a picture
i have never seen
a place
i have never been
a beauty
i have never imagined

i am stuck
in the here and now
though i feel not
in captivation
but a sense
of liberation

a freedom
i have never sought
a joy
i have never thought
a peace
that cannot be bought

i am drawn
into nothingness
though i feel
no emptiness
but an overwhelming
presence

the purest spirit
my senses could trace
the sweet lullaby
of bamboo's grace
a vast openness
now in my embrace

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  • gah I wanted to tell you my favorite part but I can't decide! I really love it all!
    the rhyming = amazing
    the flow = awesome
    the poem = yayyyy I really like it