When feeling tranquil and composed my belief
is that one day the truth will hit me so fast,
and appear in my mind as if in bold letters,
accompanied by melodic, breathless sounds,
leaving me fidgety, my confident, statuesque persona
will be relieved to know that underneath this genteel, upright exterior
lives a passionate, deep woman, with strong feelings
insistent, with an air of excited butterflies,
that flutter around with just a whisper quiet presence,
softly instilling the word………..
Ecstasy!
Vonnie~~©
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Utterly beautiful, Von. I love it. "--excited butterflies, that flutter around with just a whisper of quiet presence, --"
wonderful description.
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Hey Von, good job...
I'm afraid if I ever see the truth, I won't recognize it, I'm 52, so I kinda' know where you're coming from. I've had an epiphany at times, but nothing life altering. I like the way this poem kind of comes out and hits you, and then the ending is so sweet. It really got my attention, TAP
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Oh Von, a beautiful poem, written with such feelings...Jeff
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Thanks Jeff, I wrote this a while ago, not quite sure why I chose to post it here now Von
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Beautiful! This is very well written and a quiet reminder that ecstacy is still an worthy emotion, not just a pill.
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