More beautiful than Mona Lisa
More intriguing than her smile
Wish he could paint me a thousand stars
For I wish there are more stars in my sky
He doesn’t know anything about me
My past, my future nor my now
Wish he could give me even one more star
For I wish there are more stars in my sky
Chorus:
(For) There’s only moon…a full moon
A full moon and a fool me tonight
Why there’s only moon…a full moon
A full moon and a fooled me tonight
More enchanting than fairy tales
Lullabies and magic until the end
Why did he lure me with a thousand stars?
Maybe I wish there are more stars in my sky
My knight left me with reality
No more future and no more now
Wish he could stay and paint me one more star
For I wish there are more stars in my sky
Chorus:
(For) There’s only moon…a full moon
A full moon and a fool me tonight
Why there’s only moon…a full moon
A full moon and a fooled me tonight
Coda:
No more future and no more now
Only a full moon and a fooled me...tonight
Author notes
Like songs? I love songs and I like to write songs.
image from: http://the-dark-silhouette.deviantart.com/art/Full-moon-tonight-99526111
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A contest entry
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Comments
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wow i love the way this is worded in plays on words and feelings. its almost a sadness that's still tranquil even though you were taken in by the knights charms lovely piece, High marks!


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this is amazing. absolutely perfect


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Holy *bunny*
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wow, i really enjoyed this! it was such a smooth read, like music notes on a page, yet very deep and thought-provoking. great work!





