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Clouds are ..

Mountains of white

Ambiance of dreams

Shuddering in seclusion

modeling ..
in a perfect melody of conquest

that which with ease
rips asunder
the folly of my sight


Matchless ..

Fearless..


Only to subside in competence

Only to lean,
against an elegant suit of blue
Solid peace ..

Leaving me behind,

estranged to this actuality

This capacity of awe ..

A contest entry

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  • Wandika gold member
    March 22
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    Have not seen you for awhile.

    Good entry. But I still prefer your rhymes.

    Jim


    • EyeRaven
      March 24
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      Thank you dear friend

      I too was a bit reluctant to enter this at first ..
      how fairs you good sir ?


  • Manoj Sanyal
    March 21
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    good abstract poem....with depth.
    Thanks for your participation,
    Good luck,