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Write

Missing image


Write he says
as if by his command
I could suppurate
from constricted pores

pulling poems
out of weeping wounds
that refuse to heal

I don’t want to feel
that strongly again
the lashes of his love
still stroke my soul

Leaving lesions
mutilating
my memory

and he wants
me to immortalize
pervading pain
in lacerated lexis

So I drip
my essence on the pages
                …for him.



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Off the top of my head. Not sure if it's good or not.

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  • Edie gold member
    March 27

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    So I drip
    my essence on the pages
    …for him.




    oh I think its good.... :-) Love the finale!