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We Will

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Friday looms, time to expose those thoughts,
Unexplained judgements, meaning aught.
Contraband emotions perplex, dismayed,

Desire what they will; yet we will stay!

Friday rears, perhaps an ugly head,
Difficult words that had remained unsaid.
Nothing can touch us in any way,

Desire what they will; yet we will stay!

Fridays arrived, in the darkness, alone,
Nervous for news, glancing towards the phone
Whatever is scattered, come what may,

Desire what they will; yet we will stay!

Friday evening and my arms doth ache,
Awaiting fond perfume, my heart it quakes,
Smile away the darkness, I need you near,

Desire what they will; We have no fear!

19/3/09

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The poems about a real situation going on atm (today even) i hear this in a rocky /indie/punky way

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  • Darkwell
    April 2

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    this is stellar awesome indie i totally feel it. it doesnt matter how bad the outside can be if you got someone to love, i totally get it and i love your use of words and feelings. High marks!