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Ahmen

The grief is real, the pain intense
The sorrow is strong, there is no defence

A damaged heart, a wounded mind
A twisted soul, hard to define

No wrong was done, no intent there
Just a thoughtless lack of care

So now I die, as I go through my life
And try as I will, try as I might

I cannot let go, of my feelings so strong
Despite the fact that they now seem to wrong

Tonight I will sleep, and dream yet again
Of deaths sweet release, ahmen, ahmen

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  • Megy206
    March 20
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    I liked this.


  • Ravenblood
    March 20
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    Hmmmm. This is different to your usual style and an interesting write.
    Keep writing.

    • Where else can I really go with this? Anywhere else will lead me to places I dont think I want to explore to be honest