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The Angel's Rescue

How I fell
For the broken and damned ad
The wreckless way I stabbed at
Every vein lifting havoc

How I died
When the pain stopped the bleeding
Forcing air deep into me
Holding in was so tempting

Did you know
You were going to free me
Cut the roots binding my feet
From the sinking grass. I think

All bad stories
Have a purpose or they would
Not be written cause they could
Not survive in this world

Then my eyes
Locked on yours
I'm seeing clear again

A wolf thought to
Be all alone
Carries a love never to fade

Please don't go
My soul won't stay
Just hold my hand
At least for one more day

Breathing life
Through your sweet kiss
You steal my breath away

You sing the song
within my heart
That I could not decode

And I won't lie
For you, I'd die
So please don't cry
Just keep me alive

Author notes

Inspired by my true love, and the song Cassie by Flyleaf.

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Comments

  • wow this is a sad poem....i can feel your pain keep up the good work


  • dani girl
    March 25

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    wow

    your poem is so amazing i think you are a fantastic poet and i would love for you to comment my poems ive just joined so i only have one on their xx danielle

  • poetrynovice
    March 25
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    Touching

    Not familiar with the song but I know love when I hear it. Well done!


  • Guerrero
    March 20

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    yay.. someone wrote about the song cassie! lol..i really loved this.. this is really good and full of heart.. A wolf thought to
    Be all alone
    Carries a love never to fade
    this was my favorite.. amazing lines! great write