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I once thought love was
a positive stimulus
of an independent variable.

Smoke rings swirled
in the air
as I lay on my back
feeling the earth spin.

Now I think of cave men
who were lucky
to avoid saber tooth tigers
and realize love
is a simple concept,
but for the lucky.

It is two doves
who fly together
because one was not shot,
or ate by an Eagle.

Love is a rainbow
that beams
to the ground
on both ends
because smog
distorts light rays
just right.

I still lay on the ground
but am too old
to blow smoke rings
from my wretched lungs.

But love sweet love
is a song I sing
even by myself.

 

 

 










 

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  • Manoj Sanyal
    March 21
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    nice conceptual love poem..
    Thanks for participation.
    Good luck,


  • Nicolette gold member
    March 20

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    yes, and keep singing love's song - even when alone. this poem is both whimsical and real - loved it.

    ~ Nicolette


  • geckogirl silver member
    March 20
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